blog Topic# 5: Personal Rievew

Blog #5: Personal Review

I did overall enjoy this novel. However I definitely enjoyed the first half more than the second half. I believe as a teenager I could relate more to the experiences she was going through during those times rather than her adult year.
I was not excited to read this story when I heard it was about a girl who had a strong passion for cuisine; however I was greatly surprised by the realness this story addressed and Reichl grabbed my attention as it was revealed that her father’s first wife was admitted to a mental institution. I was further interested as she was sent away to a French boarding school and I was able to understand her conversations as a French student myself. However, my favorite part of Reichl’s story was her spiral downward and association with the “wrong crowd.” I most closely identified with this section of the autobiography as I am going through the same period in my life as well. This middle section of the book was a page-turner for me and I thoroughly enjoyed it.

The second part of the book I did not enjoy as much because I did not identify as much with it. As she began to approach married life I began to lose interest in the storyline and found myself zoning out and having to reread my paragraphs. Although her life began to become more stable and happier, I found it to be less exciting and dull. I found her fear of driving on the bridge at the end of the story confusing and cliqué. Despite the tail end of the book, I found Reichl’s story very compelling and exciting overall.

Blog Topic# 4: Symbol

Blog#4: Symbol: Alcohol

Alcohol provides an escape for Ruth during her teenage years as she begins to feel abandoned and unloved by her parents. This is also a symbol of her rebellion against her parents who know that she drinks and simply ignore it or maybe do not care at all. Her drinking also maybe linked to a cry for attention from her absent parents who are too wrapped up in their own lives by taking vacations and eating at fancy restaurants.

Ruth describes one night in which her parents are out of town so she decides to have a few friends over to drink. At one point her friend asks her if her parents will notice that all of their liquor is gone and she replies, “I fill the bottles back up with water…But it probably wouldn’t matter if I didn’t. They don’t notice anything” (78). By saying “anything,” Ruth is implying that her parents do not notice her sadness over their absentness. So, she chooses to drink to rebel against their rules for abandoning but also trying to fill the void with a drunken binge.

This failed cry for attention is greatly shown as her parents walk in the morning after when the house is barely cleaned up. The house still smells like alcohol and smoke and there are many teenagers sitting in the kitchen “breathing as if they had just ran a race.” However, Ruth’s mother’s only response is, “Oh…how nice. You’ve matzo brei for your friends. I’m so glad you’re not alone” (87). Ruth’s parents mostly likely know that Ruth and her friends were doing bad things the night before. However the choose to take a blind eye to the situation and do not see it as a desperate plea for their attention and love.

Blog Topic# 3: Theme

Blog Topic #3

As an insecure person, Ruth struggles throughout her story with self-confidence as her love for feed establishes the underlining theme of the book. This theme is finding comfort through food in order to deal with problems. Ruth first displays this theme as a young girl when she is sent away to Montreal to attend a boarding school where no one speaks English. With no friends and little communication, Ruth decides to venture out and she finds comfort in the various food stores that remind her of home. This also leads her to make her new best friend, Beatrice, a rich French girl who shares Ruth’s appreciation for fine cuisine.

Another example where this theme of finding comfort through food is displayed when Ruth as her friends over to drink. She becomes nervous when the boy she likes arrives and believes the only thing she has to offer him is her cooking. She feels insecure about her body-type and looks and attempts to find acceptance through food. This same situation is brought up again when then Superstar visited her loft after she has married Doug. The Superstar asks, “’Did he marry you because you cook so good?’” (206). Ruth avoids the question because it appears that she believes it to be true. She is so self-conscience that she truly believes the only reason people like her is for her cooking and so she often resorts to it and food itself for help.

A final time this theme is brought up is in the last chapter when she attends the party for James Beard. Feeling out of place, Ruth writes on the experience, “Out of sheer nervous shyness I ate too many deviled eggs” (270). As she becomes nervous around these older, fancy people, she decides to turn to food for comfort. Whether this is healthy or not, it leads to her career as a writer and creates the theme for her story.

Blog Topic# 2: Character

Blog Topic #2: Character: Ernst, Ruth’s father

As a child, Ruth believes she has the strongest connection with her father. She believes they are band together to defend themselves against the horrible food and mood swings of her mother. As a book designer and “detached” man, Ruth sees her father as a bland figure whose only interest is repairing and building, which he takes much pride in. Ernst appears to be a weak character in the exposition of the story: greatly controlled by his wife and, “blind to [her] failings” as a cook (13). An example of his inferiority to his wife is when they decide to take a vacation to Europe when Ruth is six and Ernst, “was not eager to leave me for such a long time, but that he didn’t know how to say so to my mother” (24). Whether Ruth’s father is afraid to speak for himself or is afraid to trigger a mood swing is unknown, however what is for sure is his unwilling acceptance of his wife’s every command.

Ruth’s father is not discussed much throughout the course of the novel. However, a different side of Ernst is revealed when Ruth’s future husband, Doug, accompanies his girlfriend on a trip home to meet her parents. Ernst takes a shine to Doug and tells him stories that not even Ruth has heard before. He explains to him how he once flew with a Wright brother and how he was a pacifist and draft dodger in Germany before he met Ruth’s mother. While this upsets Ruth, her father explains to her that he never truly had a son and was forced to live his life in a home with two women. This special bond shared with Doug reveals that Ernst is not the bland character that Ruth was saw him as and is actually a very interesting man. This “male bonding” also appears to give Ernst more confidence as he begins to have a more dominance in the relationship with his wife by not allowing her to interrupt his stories and deciding on their plans for lunch.

Blog Topic# 1: Rhetorical Strategies

Blog Topic #1: Rhetorical Strategies

“The first time it tasted like cat toes and rotted barley” (4).

“Then I swallowed and my whole mouth and throat filled with the echo of a rich chicken stock” (65).

“It was like autumn distilled in a spoon” (66).

“It looked like a lump of coal, completely covered in black mold” (100).

“We went down a few steps and found antipasti winking and glistening on a table in the front, as beautiful as jewelry” (193).

“…and the olive oil was singing with flavor. It was hard to image that four simple ingredients could marry so perfectly” (197).

“It was like eating fragrant clouds” (278).

Reichl does not use a lot of figurative language throughout the course of her autobiography. This seems appropriate for this genre and the time period in which she is telling her story. If she were to include more rhetorical strategies, I believe it would have seemed a little forced and unnecessary.

Reichl mostly restricts her figurative language to similes and personification. These are most elegantly displayed through her passion for food. Whenever the author is describing either the food she is experiencing or the food she is preparing, she seems to rely on these strategies to reiterate to the reader the extraordinary tastes she is experiencing. This is an effective way to add to her very descriptive imagery and appeal to the reader’s sense of taste. By saving these strategies for mainly her description of food, it expresses her love for it and also highlights the theme of the book.

blog Topic# 5

Blog #5: Personal Review

I personally enjoyed this story, but I did not like the lack of storyline and plot. There were many characters introduced throughout the course of the novel, however, many of them were not ever really tied together or given a key role in the story. There were several smaller stories that do not seem to have any significant importance in the story. Some of them even confused the story because they were placed in between chapters of the main storyline and only made me forget what was happening with Doc and Mack and the boys. There were also elements of the story that o thought would return later on but never showed up again. For example, when Doc finds the girl that drowned in the water, there was not even after thought as to how he felt about finding her lifeless body.

However, I did enjoy many other elements of the story. I liked how all of the citizens of Cannery Row were so closely tied together. They all may not have known each other, but they seemed to go through troubles coincidentally at the same time. Such as the aftermath of the first failed attempt at a party for Doc; everyone in the town seemed to be dealing with their own miserable predicaments. Also, I liked the character development of Mack. For half of the novel, I did not particularly like him and thought he was just selfish and rude. However, after learning of his wife and how he did not know where she went, I felt that I understood him more and found him more likable. This was also proved when it is revealed that he truly felt bad for ruining Doc’s home. I also particularly found this story as an easy read and felt that it had a very good flow with Steinbeck’s style.

Blog Topic# 4

Blog#4: Text Connections

One text connection Steinbeck makes is the references to the Great Depression. The novel was written in 1945 but tells the story of many people living through the 1930s. These text-to-worlds greatly exemplify how life was for people during The Great Depression. Prices are much lower, many people do not have much money, and unemployment is very common. For example Joey’s dad had great trouble fining a job. He was unable to provide for his family and as a result he kills himself by eating rat poison. Steinbeck shows how hard life was for these people who were greatly struggling. This pain was felt nation-wide during this time period and he attempts to untie his readers through the number of stories. This struggle seems to be the one thing that ties all of the characters together. When one character seems to be having issues, all of the characters seem to fall. After the first party, The Bear flag had to close for two weeks, Doc had to think of a way to pay for all of the damages, and Mack and the boys felt ashamed by the horrible things they had caused and felt that they needed to find work in order to make things right again. However, as soon as one of their lives started to turn around, the others seemed to be picked back up again as well.

Blog Topic# 3

Blog #3 Syntax

Long list of things sold at Lee Chong’s: “Inside the glass case were the brown cigars, the cigarettes, the Bull Durham, the Duke’s mixture, the Five Brothers…the pints, half pints, and quarter pints” (10).

Awkward conversation between Doc and Hazel: “’Oh!’ said Hazel and he cast frantically about for a peg to hang a new question. He hated to have a conversation die out like this. He wasn’t quick enough.” (34).

The first example shows the multitude of items available for purchase at Lee’s grocery. The many long lists that Steinbeck creates greatly shows how much the people of Cannery Row depend on his store and how many items are at their disposal. It also seems to compliments Lee’s personality of feeling like he is the dominate figure of his community by having a monopoly on most goods sold in the town. He knows that everyone must come to him for the purchasing of their goods and it makes him feel superior.

The second example shows without explaining it in words, how awkward the conversation between Hazel and Doc is. The short, frantic syntax shows Hazel’s inner thoughts and explains how uncomfortable the silence is. This is significant to Steinbeck’s style as it establishes his tendency to imply certain meanings through the structure of his sentences to convey his story to the reader. It also adds to his realistic style of writing by showing how an actual conversation between two people from different ends of society would really take place.

Blog Topic# 2

Blog Entry #2: Diction

Doc finds a dead girl in the water as he is looking for octopuses: “the face burned into his picture memory…Doc’s heart pounded deeply and his throat felt tight” (105).

After the party, Doc fills with anger: “Doc’s eyes flamed red with anger…his body weaved a little in his rage…Doc’s eyes shone with a red animal rage” (122).

In the fist example, Doc is frightened at the sight of finding a dead girl in the water. Doc’s horror is reflected though the author’s strong, powerful diction. Words such as “burned” express the shock Doc feels upon seeing this dreadful sight. He cannot get the horrible image out of his head and it is burned into his thoughts. The author’s choice of words such as “pounded” and “tight” express Doc’s overwhelming distraught and builds onto the frightened and disgusted tone.

In the second example, Doc’s house has just been destroyed after the part Mack attempted to throw for him. Steinbeck uses phrases such as “flamed red with anger” to express how Doc has finally been pushed over the edge and is overwhelmingly angry. He promotes this angry tone filled with rage through this dark diction. He also uses the color red several times to display how angry Doc truly is. Red is the main color associated with rage so Steinbeck uses it several times in his diction to add to the aggravated tone. Also through this dark diction, Steinbeck shows how the most benevolent character in the story can loose his temper and express true feelings of rage and anger that he soon takes out on Mack. These are the only two significant times in the novel in which Doc is associated with a dark tone.

Blog Topic# 1

Alliteration: “nobbed and needy urchins…snapping shrimps…snails and spiders…rattlesnakes, and rats” (27).

Parallelism between opposing views of stove: “a silver-scrolled monster” (40). “With the great stove came pride, and with pride, the Palace became a home” (41).

Anaphora: Constant repetition of “When” (57).

Personification: “the Row seems to hang suspended out of time in a silvery light” (81).

Rhetorical Question: “But how could they have anticipated Mack’s new method” (88).

Situational Irony: “[The Captain] was indebted to Mack and the boys” (90).

Zeugma: “As the afternoon and the whiskey went down the enthusiasm rose” (116).

Simile: “His heart was as bruised as his mouth” (131).

Alliteration is the key component to Steinbeck’s style. He relies on the repetitions on consonant sounds to establish a smooth flow and illuminate certain phrases. It also seems to give the novel a quicker pace with its rapid alliteration such as the example on page 27.

The opposing views of the beaten-down stove draw a parallel between different groups of society. The symbol of the stove demonstrates how Mack and the boys take nothing for granted and see this piece of left out trash as the pride of their home. While most civilians look on it as, “a silver-scrolled monster,” the thrifty gang sees it as a treasure. Their cheap nature gives them the view of the, “true philosophers.”

After being beaten by Doc for ruining his house, Mack is revealed to have a true conscience underneath his selfish exterior. The fact that his heart aches more than his wounds shows that Mack was truly trying to do well by Doc by throwing him a party. He is shown in a different light through this simile and his guilt greatly builds to the character of the troubled man. Until this point in the story, Mack was viewed as a flat character.